It was on a Wednesday cold cold morning. I had just awaken when I smelled something cooking downstairs. I hoped up and took a stretched and pulled out my school clothes. Next I took out the iron to prepare to iron.Iheard my grandma talking on the telephone. So I hoped in the shower and hope out . Went straight to my room and closed the door. And then I heard it . It was my lock going on it’s latch. But at the time I had paid attention. I had started putting on my clothes and turned the radio on. The t.v. was already on displaying the weather for the week which stated that it would be 15 degrees today. I put my hair in a ponytail. I was looking for my shoes that I could not find I was getting mad because it was getting closer to me to go to school. Then I looked under my bed and there they were right there where I thought they was. After all that I was set to go I grab my coat and my backpack and headed out the door. When I couldn’t get out. I pulled and pulled but still the door was not opening. I screamed and screamed but still no response. I bang on the door while yelling to the top of my lungs but still didn’t anybody hear me. I wondered if somebody knows if I was gone to school yet because my work was on the front table and I never leave my work or at least try not to. After all that banging and yelling my phone ranged. Then it came to me to call my grandma and tell her that I was locked in my room. So she sent my cousin up there to open the door. Later that day I had my lock removed I never want to experience that again. But I learned from this experience to always beaware of your surroundings. And go back and check again because you can never be sure.
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2 comments:
Kenneth Anderson
This post was pretty good. I like how you tried to give detail, and you definitely succeeded in that. I would like to suggest, however, that you try spelling some words more correctly. Some words were not in the correct tense.
BY: Jennifer Buchanan
I like your story, but I do think you should have been a little more specific. I also think you should work on your grammar because. It seems as if you knew what you wanted to say, but you just didn't know how to say it.That's all I can really say about your paper.
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