Life
By: Anthony Turner
3rd period
Life is a gift from God, and God put people on this earth to live their life as they please. He gives you the opportunity to spend time on earth to find your calling. If you feel that doing drugs and violence is the answer than that’s up to you. If you want to be successful legally go right ahead. Just know that every action there’s a reaction. You can’t get mad, because if you do the crime you do the time. You made that choice. Life is like a game. You have to make your next move your best move, but the difference is there are no extra lives.
You might think joining a gang is cool, but in the long run you either get a wake up call or be one of the guys that people pour liquor to. I rather be with the guys that are pouring than be the guy they pour liquor for. You were born on this earth by yourself, and then you will die by yourself, even if you were born with a twin you will die by yourself. When you do a crime you are doing the time by yourself. Think about it?
Don’t think you’re God, because you’re the leader of a gang, and be telling people that this is your land. It’s not your land, because the government owns every piece of land you say you own. If you’re a leader of a gang your no better than the next man. Instead of helping your community, you decide to kill by selling drugs and murdering your race. Check yourself before you reck yourself.
8 comments:
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Delisa Edwards
I really like your post. You have a lot of potential to become a great writer. However, you have to work on paragraph stucture.
I thought it was good and true
I liked what you conveyed about how you are put on this earth for a purpose.
Life is defintely a gift and I'm glad you understand that.
K.D
I Think he wrote a nice true story. Everything he said was true life that's a good ture life story there is nothing to make this story better because it already is but I like his story cause it was true.
Sharocka Malone
By: Jennifer Buchanan
I personally really loved this essay and I had no trouble reading it. I do believe this essay is a wake up call to many people and I think it can help them to make the right decisions. Anthony I really like the way you put your words together and they really made alot of sense. I think you should continue to write because you are truly on your way
this essay that you put was really good. i feel where you are coming from with the gangs and stuff.you do have people out there like that. they think that nothing can happen to them so they think they are god for real. Mary Thomas
Sheena Johnson
I think that you wrote a very good essay.
I like how you described the purpose why god put each and everyone is put on earth.
I think that you are a good writer.
I also think that you need some improvement on making complete sentences, but every thing else is god.
By Kenneth Anderson
I like this blog, because it's something I can relate to and I feel the exact same way about life. Many people are losing their lives over something so childish and petty, yet they can't see it. Some gang members are fighting and don't even know what they're fighting for, and some of the fight in unprovoked fights.
This is a topic I would've written about, and actually have written about in the past, and I believe that you really made sense of it and presented it to your fellow bloggers well. Good work ;)
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