Thursday, January 18, 2007

The day I got jumped on






Will today MR Winfrey told us that we do not have a certain bell ringer we have a free write so I guess I will write about when I got jump on for my first time I remember the day like it was yesterday it was in the summer a very nice day no clouds or no rain just cool air. I woke up smelling the great smell of a great cook my mom she was cooking breakfast so I got up and washed my face and brushed my teeth and went to my room and I started to watch some tv as I was watching tv I started to day dream I day dream about one of my girls she looks so damn good to I mean she got curves like a video chick trust me she is bad but anyways she was coming over so I was geek up. My mom called me to eat and man was it good .after I ate I called her and said be on her way and she said ok so I got in the shower so fresh and so clean clean. When she got their she brought a buddy so I called a buddy for her buddy and now were on my porch talking until someone said lets go to the park and I said no but they said yes so we went to the and we were talking just having a good time until a gang of people walked our way pass me first but I new a few of them so they walked to my friend and surrounded him and I walked over their my friend that was with them was like they cool and someone said you know them but we don’t and they started to hit my friend and some ran my way but I grab the first boy that got close and he was bigger than me but I hit him before he hit me and everyone started to hit me but I was still swinging and about forty seconds later I saw a open area and so I ran out the crowd to help my friend but by time I got over their it was broke up by some other boys I new and we was in good condition to just had got jumped on and we went home and the next day they wanted to be cool with us cause they said they just wanted to see if we were some hoe and that was it

1 comment:

mrwinfreysenglishclasses said...

Tatiana Lewis
diane you have a lot of misspelled words and your story doesnt make since because you should of read it before you wrote it, dont get me wrong its a good story but its a lot of errors in it, a lot

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