Terrance Smith
May 7, 2008
Period 1.


I think that was a good conclusion for that story, I think pohom fitted a good ending. I like pohom because he is the type that would strive for the best, nothing below it. He was the type that if he had something good and it was something better he would do anything to retrieve it. Pohom had his own land his own soil growing and food to grow.
He even made people pay a fine for letting there animals come and eat his crops. He had enough to survive. One day a man came and told him about a better place with more acres to grow his crops, so pohom to check the place out for his self. When he saw that it was exactly what the man told him, he wanted to give it a try. So he decided to move to the place that he was told about. When pohom got to the place he liked it better than what he had, but the only problem was that he had to rent a fielded to grow his crops, and pohom didn’t like that. One day a man told him about a place better than where he was at, and pohom decided to give it a try. Pohom had a long walk in the hot sun, he was dehydrated, tired, feet hurting, but he didn’t stop. He wanted to get to the place before sun set. He ran a couple of miles trying best to get there. When he finally got there, he fell out and died and the people buried him.