Thursday, October 2, 2008

writing a epic

Nobody knew who this baby was and where he came from until a woman named Maria went to forest to find food, she saw him sleeping in a bird's nest, which was placed by the bamboo. She took him home. The story about the baby made everybody in NaNo village curious, they kept wondering: "How can this baby survive in the forest filled of wild and dangerous animals?” They assumed that baby was a gift from heaven to protect this village from getting bad things. So they loved and cared for him like treasures. Maria was single, and she lived alone and she agreed to raise him. She named him Eddin, she loved him as her son. Eddin grew so fast, he was the tallest one among all the people, even he was 12. He helped Maria working on farm everyday from dawn to night, he was very strong, and he could be able to carry a pile of hay in one hand which made the other men felt envious. Everything was fine until one day, in the afternoon, the sky started getting murky and raining, the wind came from nowhere almost blew off trees and houses...Under the rain, there was a man, he probably was from the other village, and he sat on the street and cried. Seeing a strange thing, people gathered around him and asked him if he needed help. He said his name was Masha, he got no home, no family, he hadn't eaten for a long time. NaNo people felt pity for him, they went home and get food for him, but they couldn't let him sitting in the rain without any clothing, and he would be cold to death. They took him home and let him stay over in their shelter. Unfortunately, NaNo people had to pay a heavy price for being off their guard. This evening, after waiting for everybody got sleep, Masha woke up, turned into a monster with two heads, killing people and sucked their blood. Seemed like satisfy his hungry, he turned back to a normal person with a fake name Masha and went back to bed. He didn't know that there was a man behind him witnessing everything. People called him Kuhal; Kuhal couldn't believe what he saw in his eyes: a giant monster with a long tongue ever, which can contain two people in. He was scared to death, his body was shaken, and that made him can't even stand. But he tried not to get any noises in order not to get monster attention. He ran all the way to Maria's home. As he got there, he knocked the door: - I'm Kuhal. Hurry up! Open the door!Maria heard him, she immediately opened the door: - What are you doing here? You know what time it is? Too late now, can you come tomorrow?As she finished, Kuha pulled the door wider, so he could get in, he sat down, tried to catch his breath and said:-"A...a ...Monster is there...”-"What did you say? What are you talking about? Are you sick?
- "No, i am not, i am very serious."- He yelled at Maria.
- "You know Masha, he is not a person, he is a monster. I saw him killing my friends and drank their blood. I swear to God, he is a monster."
He started crying: “He killed ...My...Friends"Eddin heard the conversation between Maria and Kuha, he ran out of his room and he was very excited about it:-Where is he, right now?-It's none of your business, go back to your room and sleep. - Maria said.-But Mom, i want to know.Maria didn't say anything, she pretended she hadn't heard him-Alright, Mom, since you raise me and brought me home from forest, i have nothing to hide from you, Iam a god in heaven. Long time ago, i did kill my cousin because he betrayed me , he helped my enemy, who was the monster, fight against me, The King was very angry about me, he punished me by sending me down here, in your village, to find my cousin. And this monster is him, i have been waiting over 15 years for this moment, i have to kill him to save this village.After listening to what he said, Maria and Kuha were surprised, they speechless. Now she believed that Masha was a monster, she was like:-" So, what should we do now?"-Don't worry Mom, I know what to do, we'll see what happens tomorrow.The next morning, the village seemed like living in tears, they didn't know the reason why they died. All they could see was their skull and bones. Except Masha, he seemed happy about it. He probably had some plans for tonight. His action couldn’t pass Eddin's eyes. That night, everything was on the exact Eddin's plan. When everybody went to bed, the monster appeared, he was about to kill people by his sharp claw, but he got stopped because he got hurt from his back and his tail got cut. When he turned around, he saw Eddin on his body with his sword. Eddin immediately pointed the sword to the monster's eyes that hurt him so bad, he was writhing. His laments woke up people; they got scared and ran as fast as they could to escape their house. Now, only him and the monster, this would be a serious battle, one would be died and one would walk out and be a winner. That was all about fate. Without saying any words, Eddin jumped over and cut Masha's head off, the monster became weaker and weaker because of his injury. And one more thing, the monster couldn't do anything to Eddin because he was a god, and he had a paper that always on his body, to protect him, if this paper faced any monster or ghost, they would get melted down into what they used to be. So, Eddin took out that paper quickly, he faced that paper to the monster's face. And suddenly, his body was so hot, just like being on fire; his skin got taken off, revealed a man with a injury on a back, he almost died.
- "Long time to see you!" Eddin said.
- "I can tell that is you since I came here, even you are in a children’s body. Hahaha, why do you always interrupt my business? I hate you to death; I never forget what you did to me, my cousin, Eddin. HAHAHA." He closed his eyes and got no breath-he died.
His blood spread all over the land, wherever the blood went, and the plant grew up and the land was more fertile, which made Nano people improve their life, they got food to eat and stored for the dry season. About Eddin, after destroying the monster, he said good bye to village and returned back to heaven.
Then, to remember what he had done for Nano people, they built a monument and once a year, he comes back and visits them.

1 comment:

Upstander said...

i really like this story i felt like i was actually in the story seing everything that happen. and this sounds like a good story for an actual book :)

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