Wednesday, October 14, 2009

My Real Krazy Story!!

One day their was a girl named Allahshawnah. She was a ward of the state to her grandmother Honeygran and evil cousins Deon and DD. She was a very lonely. Her best friend and partner in crime was Chuck. Chuck was a nice boy who loved to do 1 thing “Hoop”. So shawnah was a pretty girl she jus was treated badly because her honeygran treated her different from her cousins. But back to the story. There wads this boy. His name was Mook. And shawnah was in love with him but he didn’t even know who she was. So one day something big happened. Everybody wanted to attend Big Moody party. Big Moody was known for throwing the best of the best parties. And anyone who was anyone was there. Shawnah had to get one of those invitations because she knew this would be the perfect chance for her to talk to shamar. So shawnah started thinking how she would get her hands on one of these invitations. And the only way for her to get one was for one of the guys to give it to her. So shawnah went home. Thinking yea I gotta make up this master plan, As soon as she walked in the door. Deon and DD were teasing her and flashing there invitations in her face. She was speechless and torn up. Because she knew it would be very difficult for her to get one. Let alone in private. So as her cousins teased her. She cried. And eventually went to sleep. She was so hurt. She knew if she wanted an invitation she was going to have to work hard. So that’s what she did. Shwanh had a friend named “E”. She was considered as one of the guys. So shawnah thought she could get an invitation with no problem. So shwanh went up to “E” on some low key stuff. She was glad to give her one but she was all out. So next on shawnah list was Sid Tha Kid. But he was selling his but shawnah wasn’t trying buying an invitation for 10. So last but not least she had big moody left. Nobody got within 5 feet of him because he was always in a bad mood. But not with shawnah. He had a crush on her. But shwanh and him didn’t really get along because of there attitudes. They were too much alike. So shawnah went up to him but as usual they got in to it. Not only that. They start too fought. As usual shawnah gave him a good fight as always. But Big Moody always won. SO after all that he gave her an invitation. So she was there, BOOM! Hah her outfit already. SO she was cool. The day came. Everybody who was anybody was at the party. Music was banging. The usual Gucci, Niki, Drake, Wayne, Bmc Boys, Etc. The party was crackin I mean drinks, weed, drugs, O.C. Plus it was a juke so that mean everybody was throwing something back. So the party lasted until about until 2a.m But it started to get crackin around 12:00. When mook walked in t he party people noticed him But nobody noticed him like Shawnah. He was a dancer so all the girls threw themselves at him. And he did not resist. Shawnah jus sat there and looked as he danced. But after a while Shawnah began to dance as well. So next thing you kno the party was close to the end. People started wrapping there coats up and leaving. Plus Moody was mad because his DJ played garbage music. Dj TEX. Some how some way shawnah left her head phones? And everybody knew they were hers. Because she always carried them. And when she got home she realized they were gone. She thought her cousins stole them so she argued with them until 2:30. There was a knock on the door, Deon answered it. A familiar voice floated threw shawnah her eardrum. And Said is your cousin her. Instantly DD ran to the door. Because she jus knew it was impossible for the person to want shawnah. But sure enough as the door open more in shawnahs view. It was mook. He wanted shawnah. And he wanted to return her headphones. Instantly DD and Deon had the tricot. So shawnah went outside and shut the door behind her. mook gave them to her. And instantly looked into her eyes. He never stopped and realized how beautiful she was. They began to talk on the stairs. Conversation after another. Before they knew it 2 hours had passed. They had good conversation. So the night was over with. mook had to leave because he had a game in the morning. He asked shawnah if she wanted to go. She said yes. He leaned in and gave her a kiss on the lips. I guess that was his way of showing that he liked her. And shawnah kissed him back. As he walked away. She waved and he did to. When she got in the house everybody was sleep. She had a big smile. Jumping for joy out of no were. She finally got what she wanted. And feel asleep thinking of what there life would be like. So the night was over. Shawnah had fun. Went to the party. Got the boy she wanted. With a date. I mean yea so what it took a lot than average and she was treated badly threw a lot of the times. And she still didn’t get along with her cousins. But hay that’s life right? And no matter what she wanted it to go on like that forever. And she wouldn’t change anything in the story for all the money in the n world

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