Words, illustrations, and thoughts from urban youth.
Wednesday, February 25, 2015
Short Story.
A beautiful young women named Diana was only 17 years old she lived in Chicago with her family she had 3 brtohers and 3 sisters. One night her Mom and sister decided to go to the bar, but Diana was only 17 years old, her Mom said, " Diana let's go, you dont have to drink any alcohol we just want to go because theres this really cute Dj who plays really good cumbia and other good music" Diana's Mom said " Are you sure I can go, I'm only 17 and it's my first time going to a bar" Diana said "Yes, Im sure let's just go for a bit and we'll come home right away" Diana said " But Mom what about my ID? I need one so they can see that Im supposedly 20 or something". " Don't worry we'll get you in some way" " Okay" Diana said. Diana, Alex and her Mom were getting ready to go out, Diana wored a really nice black dress uo to her knees with a little bit of nice sparkles above her waist with a nice par pair of open black open toe high heels. In about 20 min or less
Tuesday, February 24, 2015
My Transfer In
Mr. Winfrey
Creative Writing - Period 1
24 February 2015
Mia Reich
Cedar Point
Five hours away lays an enormous amusement park in Sandusky, Ohio called Cedar Point. A place where the rollercoasters take it to a whole other level. Cedar Point is like the "adult" version of Great America. During the five hour drive you get this mixture of happiness, and tiredness of course, from having to wake at 6 a.m. to get there right when it opens. On the way, you're just thinking to yourself, "What am I going to ride first?"
This amusement park lies on a thin piece of land with the view of Lake Erie wherever you turn your head. It's almost like you're on an island. As you drive, you pass many beautiful beach homes that are exciting to just glance at. The moment you finally see the rides through the fog from the lake, you get the same feeling of excitement as if you're on the ride.
You pull up in the parking lot and see many people, probably experiencing the same feelings as you. Then you look ahead and see a tall blue sign saying "Welcome to Cedar Point." Then you look up and see a big blue rollercoaster covering the first end of the park on the right to the other end on the left. It's called the Gatekeeper.
As you walk into the park you see the rest of the park ahead of you. At this point you have no clue what ride to go on. You smell funnel cakes, cotton candy, and hot dogs. Kids run all around with family and smiles on their faces. You end up riding every ride in the park, and if you have time, you repeat the best ones.
The sun slowly creeps down and the darkness slowly creeps up. You barley notice because you are so focused on the rides. The colorful lights flash on all around the park. You take a moment and think about which ride deserves to be last. You approach the ride and take it all in. You enjoy every second, drop, twist, and turn of the ride. Once you leave, you're already planning on the next time you go. Your feet give up and your eyes get low and you end up falling asleep the whole way home while remembering the good times that were just made.
Monday, February 23, 2015
Favorite Pace Story Kobe B
My favorite place would have to be Dallas, Texas. It was my first time visiting Texas I went because that's where my family reunion was held 4 yrs ago. I thought it was going to be boring but I remembered it was my first time visiting. I took the train there we had to stop on the way there at least 5 times or more for like 45 min. It was a boring train ride there all I did was sleep on the way there. When we finally arrived it was my mom, grandmother, 2 brothers and me. We walked around downtown in Dallas. I remember it wasn't a lot of stores down there. We then went to the hotel to meet up with the rest of the family. Since it was everybody in my family first time being there we got a bus with a driver to take us places so we could see things. Some times I didn't go because it was too hot so I just went to the pool everyday. It was 102 to 105 degrees everyday we where there. It's my favorite place because it was peaceful there it was different from Chicago and plus it was a nice get away in the summer for my family and I. Our last day there we had a picnic at some park it was fun. We had food and games to play I had a good time with my family. That's probably the man reason why it's my favorite place because it was the last family reunion I went to.
favorite place story Kobe B
My favorite place would have to be Dallas, Texas. It was my first time visiting Texas I went because that's where my family reunion was held 4yrs ago. I thought it was going to be boring but I remembered it was my first time visiting. I took the train there we had to stop on the way there at least 5 times or more for like 45 min. It was a boring train ride there all I did was sleep on the way there. When we finally arrived it was my mom, grandmother, 2 brothers and me. We walked around downtown in Dallas. I remember it wasn't a lot of stores down there. We then went to the hotel to meet up with the rest of the family. Since it was everybody in my family first time being there we got a bus with a driver to take us places so we could see things. Some times I didn't go because it was too hot so I just went to the pool everyday. It was 102 to 105 degrees everyday we where there. It's my favorite place because it was peaceful there it was different from Chicago and plus it was a nice get away in the summer for my family and I. Our last day there we had a picnic at some park it was fun. We had food and games to play I had a good time with my family. That's probably the man reason why it's my favorite place because it was the last family reunion I went to.
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Raymundo Hernandez Junior
Favorite Place
Tuesday, February 17, 2015
Roberto Garcia
Kobe Blackwell
Feb 2,2015
Creative Writing Per.1
It was the summer before school had started back I was going to be a freshmen. In my freshmen year I had a lot of gals such as playing basketball and getting good grades. Honestly I thought it was going to be an easy year I thought I would come here and be the man on the basketball team and in the whole school. When I got here it didn't go as planned I had to learn a lot about myself and other people. I remember when I met the basketball coach he was cool and he still is but I had to adjust to his coaching. He would have open gym for anybody that was trying out for the team and everybody would play and I didn't know anybody so when we would play I'd get nervous and not play well. I remember when we would condition we had to run 3 laps around the whole school in the hot sun I would finish last because I wasn't in good shape. Sometimes I thought I was going to fall out and just give up but I didn't I would just finish it out. When tryouts came up it was this one day called hell day were we would just run and do running drills for like 3 hours. It was tough on my body but after I had got through that day I felt I could do anything. The next day in tryouts we had skill day we would do dribbling drills and shooting drills. Last year I wasn't a good dribbler but I could shoot and play defense. When the coach said he liked to see good defense I knew I would make the team. After that day the jv coach told me I had made the team I was so proud of myself and I thought I was going to be a starter on the team. That didn't happen people on the team were better then me and could do way more stuff on the court better than I could. The jv coach didn't give until jersey until the first game which was on Dec 6,2013 and I got a old jersey I was mad and at that point I felt that I was weak and didn't deserve to play basketball. When we would have a game I never got a chance to play but I would still go to practice. I thought I was working hard and the coach felt that I wasn't so sometimes I wouldn't go to practice. Not playing in the games made me feel terrible every day and I would just be mad at myself. It was this one person that gave me hope that I could play basketball. That person was a guy name Omar we built a relationship to were when I'd came gym we would do basketball drills. We would do dribbling, shooting, and defensive drills he was the person that made me better. I started to see myself getting better and better each day and I just kept working on my game with him to get confidence. The first time I realized I was getting better was when there would open gym at the park I would do stuff that the people I usually play with never saw me do. They would say good things like "I see you" or "You been in here working on your game." I remember we had a spring league tournament at Kennedy and people on the team still thought I was weak I had one game where I hit 6 threes and the game winning three. Omar would always tell me to be confident and play your game he was the reason why I didn't quit the basketball team my freshman year. Also in the summer at the park I was going to they would have tournaments I hit 3 three point shots in a row and the other team started yelling "Who got Kobe." I just laughed and Omar said to me "When they start saying that it's funny because they not use to you doing that." Also Omar helped me with my basketball IQ by saying "The coaches at Kennedy call you a shooter." I said "Yes what wrong with that." He said "do you know when you missing you not going to be a factor in the game." I never thought about that so when we did the dribbling drills he would tell me to attack the rim hard and finish. He made me realize getting to the basket a couple time will make the defensive back up and let you shoot that mid range shot and the 3 point shot. When I got my dribbling up to where I could get to a certain spot on the court and to the rim it helped me out a lot. Omar always told me to play with confidence and I started doing that it helped me become a better basketball player than I ever thought I could be. Every time I played I felt I had to play with a chip on my shoulder and it helped me play well and prove all the doubters wrong. I felt like I finally had some body on my side that wanted to see me do good and that was rooting for me and it felt good. Coming into my sophomore year at Kennedy I wanted to start for the jv team that was the focus. Once I told Omar I was starting he said "I knew was going to start because I saw you getting better." I asked him "How many points should I score. He looked at me and said "15 or more if you continue to play the same way you playing now." This the highest I score in the game was 12 against Urban Prep but we lost I was upset. The next game we won so i felt my team bounced back and played well that game. Now Omar and I still do basketball or we just sit in his office and talk about how basketball is at Kennedy. Sometimes we even talk about what I still need to work on and sports. I look at Omar as a mentor because if it wasn't for him I wouldn't be playing basketball right now. After I accomplished starting on JV I felt that stopped playing with that chip on my shoulder I felt I need to get back to doing that. Once I did I started playing just how was before the season had started. Every time I come in the gym I to work hard and get better but people always tell me that I don't and they tell me I have attitude this and that. It just makes me laugh and I block it out at the end of the day. Also I want a higher GPA this year and I know I have to work really hard and do all my work. This year I started off kinda bad I got a D in geometry it made me mad but the next semester that is not going to happen. I really just want my sophomore year to be better then my freshman year and so far it hasn't to me but its still time to improve it. That what I'm working at now getting good grades and getting better at basketball. I also realized this year that i need to be to take criticism in order to get better at basketball. That those bad habits that I have need to stop because my freshman year it real made me realize that nothing is going to come easy that you have to work hard. Now I'm starting to work hard and not wish that things will come easy. I take everything I do now serious because I never know if I'm going to get another chance to do it again.
Entry #1- Well this is weird I plan to keep a journal and just keep track of what's going on in my
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Niagara Falls, one of the world's greatest natural wonders, can only be described as breath taking. No matter what time of year, whether it's the beautiful rainbows glistening in the mist, or the magnificent ice bridge created by the cold of winter, Niagara Falls always seems to amaze everyone.. On July 28 2010, I was given the opportunity to travel to New York and see the expansive falls with my own eyes. The falls serve as a border between the U.S. (New York) and Canada (Ontario). The falls actually consist of the American Bridal Veil Falls and the Canadian Horseshoe Falls, collectively called Niagara. The water flows at an amazing 212,000 cubic feet of water per second. Niagara Falls has been nicknamed the "Rainbow City". On any sunny day, a rainbow can be seen over the falls, adding to the charm of the city. I soak in the beauty of the water falling over several thousand feet sitting near state park. Around me there are a lot of people enjoying this heavenly view, snapping pictures and experiencing the rush of the Niagara waterfalls. As I am sitting down near state park i came across looking at my first groundhog enjoying this lovely sunny day . The sun is about to set. There are about 200 colored and white calcium torpedo lights located along the road down the bank of the Canadian side of the gorge and behind the water of the Horseshoe Falls. People from around the country travel to see the falls, but unless they are also viewed at night, one cannot fully comprehend their true beauty. Each night, various-colored lights illuminate the falls. Blue, yellow, purple, green, and pink light up the falls, creating a flowing rainbow of water for all to see. The lights change every few minutes fading in and out, softening the effect of the water.
A photograph could capture only a small part of Niagara Falls. A simple snapshot could never capture the wonderful rushing sound of the water pouring over and splashing into the basin below. A picture could not possibly create the wonderful motion of the water as it continuously flows over the rocks. To fully take in the sights and sounds of the majestic falls, one would have to visit them personally.. There was the distinct smell of clean air, like the way it smells early in the morning. The Horseshoe Falls are one of the nature's marvels. The Algae on the rocks by water had a very distinct odor. The aroma of chicken being roasted or fish being baked on the roadside just slams into your face with the wind. The atmosphere in the forest near lake was unmarked, but a slightly musty smell was still here.