Thursday, April 17, 2008

Reginald Saul
I think that this article is making a great point about the violence in the city of Chicago. I think that there are many reasons why are city is becoming the most terrible place to live in. One the reasons why I think that is because the police spend to much time trying to follow, and arrest innocent people for petty thins when we have people walking up and down the streets with guns every day. Another the reason why our city is becoming the most terrible place to live is because teens are looking up to drug dealers, and gang members and wanting to be like them, instead of looking up to people like Lebron James, Barock Obama, or Oprah Winfrey. Another reason why is because schools aren’t having enough activities like open gym on weekends, or school dances. Another reason why is because of the guns that are being brought into our neighborhoods. The guns are getting passed down to teens that want to act tough and get respect so they take others lives. One of the main reasons why Chicago is becoming the most terrible place to live is because the parents are not strict enough. The parents have knowledge that their kids are in the gang and selling drugs, and instead of trying to guide them and give them knowledge they kick them out on the streets without giving it their all. Those are the reasons why I think that Chicago is becoming the most terrible place to live, and the ways that we could make it better.

1 comment:

Mr. Winfrey said...

I think that there are many reasons why are city is becoming the most terrible place to live in.

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I think that there OUR many reasons why are city is becoming the most terrible place to live in.

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