The biggest wrong I think people can commit is murder. Murder is the worst thing that could happen in this world. Why would you want to kill somebody? These young people that form their own squads are the problem. They are the ones who are doing all the killing? Murder is the most popular thing going on in this world. This is a very wrong thing to say. It seems like the only thing people know now days is guns. If the police get on their jobs maybe they would stop harassing people who are not committing the crimes. Then maybe all the murder will decrease. The only people it seems like that are getting killed is younger people and innocent ones. Don’t anybody have fair fight anymore. They just run and go get a gun. They don’t even think about what could happen or the consequences. The mayor need to build something that could keep theses kids focused. Then maybe there want be a lot of shooting. If punishment could be made to fit this crime is life in prison. The reason why I think they should get life is because they have took someone else life. So therefore their life should be taken away from them. If the sit behind bars for almost the rest of their life then I bet they would have thought twice about what they done. People that commit murders should suffer. Just like the people that have lost their loves ones have to suffer. So this why I think this is the biggest wrong people can commit and what punishment should fit this crime.


Denisha brown
2nd period
5-1-08
Bell Ringer 30E