The Deal That Went Wrong
By Carolyn Green



As a black chevy impala pulled up into the parking lot, you could see the shines from the rims about a block away. A guy in a black hoody and black pants jumped off a mailbox and walked slowly to the car looking both ways. Inside the car was a dude named Chris and his girl KK. As Chris slowly rolled down the window, the boy began telling him about the next drop off and what time to come pick it up. Chris was getting upset because he was told the same thing yesterday and he couldn’t wait any longer. He needed his money and he wanted it now, so he jumped out the car and stole off dude as KK in the background yelling, “That’s right boo.” while doing her nails.

He then, calmly, walked back toward the car and, as he closed the door, dude put his hand through the window. Chris rolled up the window and, as he bagged up, he crushed his fingers having to hear enough of all the yelling he decided to let him go. The next morning Chris got up, washed up, and called his girl. They then met up at a restaurant and ate breakfast. They then began talking about what went down yesterday and got to laughing. When that night came and Chris went back to dude again.. He pulled up thinking that he was going to get his money, but dude busted him and he was shot in the head.