The Young Girl Who Was On Her On.
Shiquita Davis

There once lived this girl named Treniece, she was a quiet and lonely girl. Treniece was the only child. Treniece and her mother lived in a two bedroom apartment. Treniece’s mother Sherri worked two jobs to support. Treniece and herself, Treniece barely seen her mother only at night. One day when Treniece came home, she seen a strange man sitting on the couch

“Who is you” said Treniece.
“Oh your mom told me about you is Eric”
“Where is my mama?”
“She is in the back room”

So Treniece ran to go see her mom and asked her who that man is sitting in the front room.

“That’s my new boyfriend Eric.”
“Yeah he told me his name”
“So is he staying with us “said Treniece?
“Yeah”

Treniece walked away after her mom made a respond. Treniece knew every time her mother let a man stay with them she loses her job and just sit up under a dude that has no job, no money no none thing. Days weeks and months went by, Eric didn’t have no job, and the surprising thing about her mother she quit her job. Treniece was so hurt about what her mom did, because she told Treniece that she wasn’t going to do the same old thing over, but she did. While Sherri was out with her friends, Eric had just come in from drinking. Treniece was in her room watching TV. Eric had came into her room and asked her to come and sit and talk with him. So Treniece went into the front room. While they were talking Eric pulled out a fifth of gin and started drinking, he asked Treniece do she want to drink.

“Naw I don’t want to drink.”
“Come on it taste good.”

So Treniece tried some and she wanted some more, Treniece was so drunk she passed out. Eric knew he had her now; Eric picked her up and took into her room. He pulled down her panties; next he took off all his clothes and got on top of her. Treniece was a virgin, when he was finish he put back on her clothes and his and left and went into his room and went to sleep. When Treniece got up she had a painful pain in her stomach. When she went into the bathroom, she pulled down her underwear down and it was blood everywhere. Treniece knew it wasn’t time of the month yet. She knew Eric raped her. When Sherri got in Treniece was crying real badly.


“What’s wrong” said Sherri

“Eric rape me”

“You lying B#$*& you just mad cause I got a man that can take care of me” said Sherri


“Am not mama look at my underwear.”

SoTreniece showed her mama her underwear.

“Get out my house, pack your stuff up and get out my house.”

“Where am I going to go?” Said Treniece.

“I don’t know but you got to get out my house”

Treniece packed all of her belongings up and while she was leaving out the front door Treniece turned around and told her mother.


“You are going to regret of what you did to me.”

She walked out of the house Treniece didn’t have no where to go, so she just walk the streets all night. In till a black S.U.V pulled up and stopped on the side of her. They raised the window down it was a female Carmel completion, blonde hair and nice dressing. She had a couple more girls in the car, but Treniece couldn’t see them.


“What’s up girl? Why you walking the streets this late at night you a hooker, you look to scary to be a hooker” said Tina

“Naw am not a hooker my mama just put me out of the house and I don’t have no where to go”




“Why did she put you out for?”

“Because her boyfriend raped me and she thought I was lying and that I was just jealous of her.”

“Well my name is Tina you can come with me.”

At first Treniece was scared to get in the car, but it was late and she was very sleepy, so she went with her.
“My name is Tina, this Damika, Pooh, Monei and Tay, what’s your name “Treniece.”

“Well Treniece am going to be real honest with you we in this car are strippers, we was just like you and look at us now.”

“What you mean look at ya’ll now.”

“Just look we got money, cars, jewelry, clothes everything, everything we every wanted we got it. So am going to tell you something and you can think it over in till the morning. My girl is looking for more girls to dance and if you come.”

So Treniece went with her to her house she let her sleep in the guest room, all that night Treniece though about what she said. That next day Treniece ate some breakfast, washed up, brushed her teeth, got dressed and waited for Tina to wake up. Tina had woke up about 12:30pm

“Dang girl you slept all day.” Said Treniece.

“Girl please I working all night, I need to get some sleep.” said Tina.

“Tina I need to talk to you about something.”

“What is it?”

“You know what it is.”

“Oh, you talk about what I told you last night.”

“Okay.”

“Yeah.”
“Okay what.”

“I’ve been thinking I want that job.”

“Okay you will come to work with me tonight then, but first I have to call Keishay the girl who need more dancers and tell her am bringing you.”

Tina was hated on by a lot of people especially by females; Tina was a nice looking girl. That night Tina knew something bad was going to happen to her, but she felt like that every night. Treniece was so happy that someone is helping her out. As they were getting ready to go to the club, Tina was getting some private phone calls, they were telling her “To get ready to die.” Tina didn’t let that bother her. Tina and Treniece left to go to the club. As they were pulling up a black tinted window car pulled up on beside her blocking her pass so Tina raised her window down to say something to them, but while she was raising her window down they were too, and as soon as her window went down a.35caliber came out the black car window and shot four times, then the car drove off. Everyone was screaming, yelling and running. They had shot and killed Tina, it was some girls she got into it with back in the day they were coming back for revenge. Treniece was so upset and sad, because she loved Tina for what she did for her. Treniece told herself she would be another Tina, but Better & THE BEST.